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The minutes
seem endless
as they tick by
softly, slowly, painfully.
I shift restlessly, watching that clock.
It seems that time cannot go fast enough;
and yet it went too far, too fast, before I knew it.
One moment, you were there by my side;
The next, you were simply a memory;
a lingering shell
like the ghost
of a kiss
on the
Cheek.
seem endless
as they tick by
softly, slowly, painfully.
I shift restlessly, watching that clock.
It seems that time cannot go fast enough;
and yet it went too far, too fast, before I knew it.
One moment, you were there by my side;
The next, you were simply a memory;
a lingering shell
like the ghost
of a kiss
on the
Cheek.
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I don't think this poem needs much explanation. *Smiles grimly*
~Claimer~
Poetry (c) to myself *CloakedSchemer06
~Claimer~
Poetry (c) to myself *CloakedSchemer06
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This is gorgeous. I envy your ability to convey emotion; this is dripping with feeling.
>>;
That didn't come out right, but I don't know how to say it any better.
ANYWAYS.
I love it.
I wish I could make it so that this poem had no reason to exist, but...I can't, and I don't know that you'd want me to.
*hugs tightly*
I don't know what I can say to you that will help. I feel like my Al...I'm totally clueless, and I don't want to do something stupid, but I'm sure I will in the end...I just want to make you feel better.
I'm getting off topic. I hate how you hurt, but I love the way you find creativity and inspiration in it.
I told you, you're strong. You wouldn't be able to do that if you weren't.
I love you. Please don't forget it. <3
>>;
That didn't come out right, but I don't know how to say it any better.
ANYWAYS.
I love it.
I wish I could make it so that this poem had no reason to exist, but...I can't, and I don't know that you'd want me to.
*hugs tightly*
I don't know what I can say to you that will help. I feel like my Al...I'm totally clueless, and I don't want to do something stupid, but I'm sure I will in the end...I just want to make you feel better.
I'm getting off topic. I hate how you hurt, but I love the way you find creativity and inspiration in it.
I told you, you're strong. You wouldn't be able to do that if you weren't.
I love you. Please don't forget it. <3